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Sentence The three controls are, the damper lever below the door, the "second combustion" chamber lever above, and the door with its handle and seal.

Which correction should be made to sentence 5?

A.

remove the comma after are

B.

insert a comma after damper lever

C.

remove the comma after below the door

D.

insert a comma after chamber lever

E.

replace its with it’s

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Sentence 1As an employee, any organization would be proud to have someone like her.

A.

proud to have the type of person

B.

an employee that would be proud

C.

any organization of the type of person

D.

someone whom any organization

E.

as an employee, proud

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Sentences 11 and 1Although he painted all kinds of flowers.He is usually associated with his paintings of sunflowers.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of these sentences? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

flowers.He is usually associated

B.

flowers, he is usually associated

C.

flowers, but he is usually associated

D.

flowers, and he is usually associated

E.

flowers, being associated

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Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

dedicates himself

B.

dedicated himself

C.

dedicating himself

D.

dedicating, himself

E.

dedicating him self

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Sentence 9:His paintings include many portraits, especially those of peasants and weavers.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

portraits, especially those

B.

portraits, especially these

C.

portraits, especially, those

D.

portraits especially those

E.

portraits.Especially those

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Sentence 1Any delivery that is requiring less than three hours to deliver by us is considered by us to be a rush delivery.

Which is the most effective rewrite of sentence 12?

A.

Three hours or less by us is a rush job to consider delivering.

B.

Because it is less than three hours it is considered a rush delivery by us and it takes less time to deliver by us.

C.

By us, a delivery that is a rush delivery could take less than three hours and it is considered a rush delivery.

D.

Delivering in less than three hours, the package delivered is considered a rush delivery.

E.

Any delivery of less than three hours is considered a rush delivery.

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Sentence 8:The next step is to prepare the walls, any nail holes should be filled with spackle.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

walls, any nail

B.

walls, but any nail

C.

walls.Any nail

D.

walls any nail

E.

walls yet any nail

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Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 21?

A.

move sentence 21 to the beginning of paragraph A

B.

remove sentence 21

C.

move sentence 21 to follow sentence 2

D.

move sentence 21 to the beginning of paragraph C

E.

no revision is necessary

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Sentences 8 and 9:Learn to be creative with words.Learn how to make your resume the one that is put on the top of the pile.

The most effective combination of sentences 8 and 9 would include which group of words?

A.

Learn to be creative with words and making

B.

Learning to be creative with words, you can learn

C.

Being creative with words, and make

D.

Being creative with words and putting

E.

Learn how to be creative with words and to make

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Sentence 1When I tried contacting your branch office in Tucson, we got a message telling me that the number was out of service.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

Tucson, we got

B.

Tucson, I got

C.

Tucson.We got

D.

Tucson we got

E.

Tucson we were giving