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Sentence After you prepare a checklist with the following steps, your move was less of a headache than you might expect.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

your move was less

B.

your move being less

C.

your move will be less

D.

your move less

E.

your moving less

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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of paragraph C?

A.

sentence 8

B.

sentence 10

C.

sentence 11

D.

sentence 12

E.

sentence 13

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Sentence 2Ms.Ciofreddi and me think that it is up to all of us to work together to address this policy.

Which correction should be made to sentence 21?

A.

insert a comma after Ciofreddi

B.

insert a comma after me

C.

change me to I

D.

change us to them

E.

no correction is necessary

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Sentence 10:On the contrary, this keeps the roots shallow and the grass vulnerable to pests and the whether.

Which correction should be made to sentence 10?

A.

change this keeps to that kept

B.

change keeps to keep

C.

insert a comma after shallow

D.

replace whether with weather

E.

no correction is necessary

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Sentence 1Also, an automobile ran in a closed garage emits highly toxic levels.

Which correction should be made to sentence 14?

A.

replace Also, with Because

B.

change ran to running

C.

insert a comma after garage

D.

change emits to emitting

E.

change levels to level

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Sentence Because I have agreed with many of your previous editorials, I do not agree with your position regarding the proposed shopping mall on the south end of town.

Which is the best way to rewrite the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

Because

B.

Since

C.

Unless

D.

However,

E.

Although

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Sentence 1Not only is water being wasted through evaporation, but also conditions they are being created for the sun to burn your lawn.

Which correction should be made to sentence 13?

A.

replace Not only is water being with Water not only being

B.

replace but also with however

C.

replace but also with and

D.

replace conditions they are with conditions are

E.

no correction is necessary

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Sentence 10:Aggressive and impatient driving have a price at the gas pump.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

have

B.

has

C.

had

D.

are having

E.

was having

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Sentence An “Invoice and Statement” was received telling me that I owe an operation called:Allstar Football Benefit

$29.65 in the mail last week.

The most effective revision of sentence 4 would begin with which group of words?

A.

In the mail last week, I received

B.

Receiving an “Invoice and Statement,” an operation

C.

I owed by being told to me in an “Invoice and Statement”

D.

Telling me that I owe in the mail

E.

$29.65 is owed by me

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Sentence 1Facilitators at our two sessions are human resources experts they have logged many hours with Fortune 500 firms.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

experts they have logged

B.

experts and logged

C.

experts who have logged

D.

experts who will log

E.

experts logging