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Sentence 8:That experience will give you just as much exercise, and you will have an opportunity to witness firsthand nature at work.

The most effective revision of sentence 8 would include which of the following group of words?

A.

firsthand witness

B.

nature at working

C.

will give them just

D.

Those will give you

E.

exercise and an opportunity

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Sentence 7:Please contacting the undersigned to make the appropriate arrangements.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

contacting the undersigned

B.

contact the undersigned

C.

contacting the undersign

D.

be contacting the undersigned

E.

have contacted the undersigned

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Sentence 6:Most new service representatives require more than three months of intensive training before they are ready to handle the position on there own.

Which correction should be made to sentence 6?

A.

change require to requires

B.

replace than with then

C.

insert a comma after training

D.

replace there with their

E.

replace there with her

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Sentence 1Organic fertilizers last the whole year and prevented the growth on which bugs feed.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

prevented

B.

prevent

C.

prevents

D.

was preventing

E.

were preventing

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Sentence 9:I would also encourage staff to make every effort to file the reports correct and return them to the files after using them.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

correct and return

B.

correct but return

C.

correctly and return

D.

correctly and to returning

E.

correctly and returned

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Sentence 9:In spite of the initiatives of these organizations, there is still groups who are not willing to do their part.

Which correction should be made to sentence 9?

A.

change these to those

B.

change organizations, there to organizations there

C.

replace there with they’re

D.

change is to are

E.

replace who with to whom

Which revision should be made to improve the effectiveness of paragraph C?

A.

move sentence 13 to the end of paragraph C

B.

remove sentence 13

C.

move sentence 14 to the beginning of paragraph C

D.

move sentence 14 to the beginning of paragraph D

E.

remove sentence 14

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Sentence 10:Also created many still-life paintings.

Which correction should be made to sentence 10?

A.

replace Also with He also

B.

insert a comma after Also

C.

insert had after Also

D.

change life to lives

E.

change paintings to paints

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Sentence 9:Elena has always been a conscientious employee who represented our company in the best possible manner.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

employee who represented our company

B.

employee who, represented our company

C.

employee who represented our company,

D.

employee, who, represented our company

E.

employee, who represented, our company

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Sentence 6:We also would like to call your attention to the Multi-Account Discount, you may be eligible to receive this discount if you or your spouse has an Applegate automobile policy.

Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.

A.

Discount, you may

B.

Discount, while you may

C.

Discount.You may

D.

Discount, however, you may

E.

Discount, in addition, you may